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I run to my room.
The anger will boil over soon.
I lock the door,
Fall to the floor.
The glittering pen rests before my sight.
I'm falling again tonight.

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


Clean for a week.
But without a voice to speak,
The crimson ink called to me.
The paper bleeds.

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


I tried to give it away.
But I keep on feeding the pain.
Why when I soar for a moment,
Do I fall again to a world of torment?

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


I want this addiction to leave me here.
I hate the girl in the mirror.
She isn't who I want to see.
She's not who I long to be.

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


Darling I fell,
Back into my personal hell.
Can't I rise from the ashes?
The agony never passes.
The blade continues to stop my cries, it takes more of me.
Nightmares are my lullabies, the paper bleeds with crimson ink.
Just wrote it. Inspired off a random drawing I saw. Please comment and say what you think!
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing, intense and I can relate to it.
Very nice.
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:wow: ....thank you! Sooooo much! That means A LOT to me! I'm really glad you can relate to the song:)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not :P but its really nice, keep up the good work
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will:) Thank you!
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FunsizeLovesDonuts Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Strong strong strong emotions. Very well written. I really really like this one.
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!! It means A LOT to me!
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FunsizeLovesDonuts Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
You're welcome. :D
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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polarpoisson Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
I can feel the strong emotions in it!
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Thank you very, very much! I'm SO glad!
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