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I run to my room.
The anger will boil over soon.
I lock the door,
Fall to the floor.
The glittering pen rests before my sight.
I'm falling again tonight.

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


Clean for a week.
But without a voice to speak,
The crimson ink called to me.
The paper bleeds.

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


I tried to give it away.
But I keep on feeding the pain.
Why when I soar for a moment,
Do I fall again to a world of torment?

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


I want this addiction to leave me here.
I hate the girl in the mirror.
She isn't who I want to see.
She's not who I long to be.

Pleasure is turning.
My arm is burning.
Sweet release.
I need your peace.
The paper bleeds with crimson ink.

We fought again.
The wounds won't mend.
I was driven back,
To the strength I lack.


Darling I fell,
Back into my personal hell.
Can't I rise from the ashes?
The agony never passes.
The blade continues to stop my cries, it takes more of me.
Nightmares are my lullabies, the paper bleeds with crimson ink.
Just wrote it. Inspired off a random drawing I saw. Please comment and say what you think!
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing, intense and I can relate to it.
Very nice.
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:wow: ....thank you! Sooooo much! That means A LOT to me! I'm really glad you can relate to the song:)
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isasongs Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not :P but its really nice, keep up the good work
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will:) Thank you!
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FunsizeLovesDonuts Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Strong strong strong emotions. Very well written. I really really like this one.
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!! It means A LOT to me!
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FunsizeLovesDonuts Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
You're welcome. :D
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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polarpoisson Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
I can feel the strong emotions in it!
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Thank you very, very much! I'm SO glad!
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Brittle-Wilddog Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
OMG I love this! I read it twice!!!
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU!!! And really? Wow......
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S-catchy-Cookie Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nighmares are my lullabies... great choice of words! The whole song is great of course as usual ;)
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much! I was hoping that line would have impact.....I'm SO happy it does!
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S-catchy-Cookie Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :happybounce:
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:faint:
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Elixa-Carr Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Writer
:O_o: Biography.
I love it. :iconblackheartplz:
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? That's....good and bad!

Awwww:) Thank you! I'm very, very glad!!!
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OpheliaNurk12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
damn love
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:wow: Thhh--thank you!!!
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
So the pen is like a knife and the paper is like skin, right? Thats how I saw it o3o
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly! :clap: Bravo my dear!
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
:squee: Hooray!
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconurawesomeplz:
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KillMyBleedingHeart Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
This is just epic! You are a great song writer, I reckon that one day you could be making songs for the famous people!
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconjawdropplz: Wow...thank you!!! You really think so?
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KillMyBleedingHeart Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Most definitely, you found a word that rhymed every time and it just was epic!
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:wow: :faint: Thank you!
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KillMyBleedingHeart Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Hehe no worries
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dawww:)
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RailAybara Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Damn, that's intense.
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...thank you!
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RailAybara Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
I've always wondered, how do you get that imagery going? I want it for my poems, haha
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:blush:
And um....I'm not sure, most times its based off an emotion I feel at the time, and it just....comes out....
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RailAybara Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I guess I need to start feeling emotion then.
Having more imagery and feelings in my poems might be nice
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D I think ya do already!
I suppose, but your poems are REALLY good!
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RailAybara Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thank you.
It seems that they don't get a lot of recognition though.
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
Have you posted any new ones?
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