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He sits on the bed, bent over with his fingers interlaced on top of his head. Her words echoing down the hallway are still burning in his ears. Why does daddy like making me afraid of him? The man lowers his hands and lifts one of them to still his trembling lips. I'm scared he's going to hurt me. He blinks, trying desperately to hold the tears back. Does daddy even love me Mama?  The man gives up and starts to weep uncontrollably, his back shaking with every sob. Why does he scream at me so much? He looks up and his words are barely audible. "I'm so sorry." The man can taste salty tears on his lips. Mama, I'm so scared. I want to die. He can still see her sitting there wearing a white night gown, her dead mother's dress spread on her lap. Mama I'm coming to you. "No!" He screams, reaching for something that's no longer there. I love you Mama. The girl says as she lifts the knife with quivering hands, and plunges it into her heart. "No." He whispers, and the darkness closes in on him. His daughter's deep blue eyes look up at him, filled with tears and sorrow. And from her bloody lips he still can hear her last words. I love you daddy. Liquid crimson is spreading over the wedding dress the little girl clutches in her dying fingers. Her words won't stop singing in his ears, like the grief filled symphony of the dead. I love you so much. The man hangs his head, and all that can be heard in the room are his heart wrenching sobs. I forgive you.
*sigh* Emotions are interesting things....anyway, I appologize for this being so sad. I hope you like it anyway. Please comment and tell me what you think. And this is NOT endorsing suicide! I strongly stand against suicide, it causes so much pain. However I had to express these feelings and thoughts, so somehow this is the way it came out....
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DRAGONlolidk123 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
o.O that's so dark and said.. you pretty much blew me away. I feel sorry for the man. Love it :D
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, even though the stories sad.
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DRAGONlolidk123 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Yesssss:D
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconimhappyplz:
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DRAGONlolidk123 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
loks like a derp face :D
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really, dost thou think so?
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DRAGONlolidk123 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
I really dost thinkest that of which is derpy.. I don't even know...:D
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe:D
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cheddarofallcheese Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Student General Artist
;A; duuuuudddeeeeee its so dark <3
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah....do you like it?
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