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Don't worry dear, I will go lock my heart in a box and let it suffocate so it doesn't bother you anymore.

I am alone, but don't be concerned! 

I'll hide all the broken glass inside myself and let it cut me apart.

I'll choke all my emotions down as they rise like blood in my throat and steal my breath.

I'll bury the dark thoughts in my mind and let them turn to poison.

This is the best way.

And I'll smile through the agony even though its fake.

This is killing me, but don't worry!

Just so I won't upset you at all.

So you don't get uncomfortable.

Don't be upset dear, we both know its the best thing.

After all you could never handle my pain anyway.

Cheer up sweetie, can't you see me crying tears of joy that are insincere? 

Its all for your benefit, so enjoy it darling and pretend you can't see!

And I'll just keep the bleeding inside me.
One of my first attempts at prose...eh, I won't worry about it.
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Manatsujeki Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
It's relieving when someone else can depict the thoughts in your mind, because you're forbidden to say them yourself. Strong message.~
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy that I could express the emotions and thoughts for you! Its my highest wish. And I know what you mean, I've felt the same way many times. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart!
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1313-BB Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
[it's :iconaskmatt: I just logged onto this account while staring at this. 8I
Anyway,
i really like this!
I like the part when it says:
" I'll choke all my emotions down as they rise like blood in my throat and steal my breath. "
It sounds so..I don't know how to explain it!


You're Amaaazing~! :iconiloveitplz: ]]
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU!!!! :squee: I'm really glad, cause I've never tried this before:)
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You-Are-Worth-It Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
I really like this. One of my favourite lines is
"I'll hide all the broken glass inside myself and let it cut me apart."
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much! And that's one of my favorite lines as well:)
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You-Are-Worth-It Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
You're very, very welcome :)
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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You-Are-Worth-It Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
Hahah :) <3
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thank you!!!
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